by Lydia and Arash part 2
… countryside Mum said yes so we went to the countryside and they found a park with lots of bushes. In the park they rushed over to the slide that was blue and red, Katie went on the slide first. On the slide Katie saw a strange glowing thing in one of the bushes. So Katie rushed over to the bush which was glowing. Katie called Ashley to come and see the mysterious glowing thing. She came over and they saw the glowing again. Suddenly they saw a little glowing butterfly
what do the girls do? ……
Mr Kilgour, Assistant Headteacher, Darrick Wood Junior School said,
October 4, 2011 @ 8:10 pm
I’m really enjoying reading your story and voting on what happens next. What a super idea!
Nicole Clutton said,
October 12, 2011 @ 7:24 pm
good story Arash and Lydia its great
Anonymous said,
October 12, 2011 @ 7:25 pm
good story Arash and Lydia its great
Nicole Clutton said,
October 12, 2011 @ 7:28 pm
great story Arash and Lydia
Emer said,
October 15, 2011 @ 12:32 pm
I wood take it to the countryside
I love it
Aaron Fairfield's "Dad" said,
October 19, 2011 @ 6:42 pm
Good story Arash and Lydia its great.I voted Help it and take it home. A*
Callum said,
October 21, 2011 @ 11:33 am
Wow your blog is fantastic You shold be proid of yourself
olivia said,
October 21, 2011 @ 11:59 am
what a great story! I need to find part 1 of that! Arash and Lydia,you 2 are great story writers. I want to read loads more of your writing!
kira Griffass said,
October 31, 2011 @ 9:45 am
very good work
kira grifas said,
October 31, 2011 @ 9:56 am
graet work i wish i could do that well done